2. Most of the feedback I got from my second elevator speech was very positive. I was not told to change anything from the feedback that I got. I think the feedback that I received from my first elevator pitch was enough to get my going in the right direction for the second one.
3. Based on all the positive feedback, I decided not to change much at all about my elevator pitch. This is roughly the same pitch with a few minor tweaks to the order in which I state things.
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI like that you jumped right into your pitch, and differentiated your idea and skills from competitors. This highlights what will make a consumer choose you over any other similar idea that meets a need. If you tighten up your delivery a little bit more, I think the pitch will be flawless! All of the 'um's and pauses were a bit distracting and made me less confident in what you were trying to get me to believe in.
Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteOnce again, you have done a great job! You truly have your viewers engagement and attention. You were able to show the skill of your idea and how it is better than the ideas of competitors. Your two previous pitches were always great but I would say you definitely perfected it this time! Great job with your elevator pitch Max!
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI think this was your best elevator pitch yet! It felt very natural and it flowed very nicely. I liked how you compared your company to linked in but explained why it was better and how it is different from your competitors. That's a great comment to add in an elevator pitch because it shows what sets you apart from other companies. Great job!