1) I believe there is a very good opportunity in the personal assistant field for me to create a company and maximize the opportunity. My target market will consist of private business owners of any age. I believe there is a need for a fast and easy way to match up college students that would work as personal assistants in select areas. An application or website that will allow you to search for a personal assistant in any specific field that the consumer needs. I want people who are in need of a personal assistant to utilize our college students who will be getting paid minimum wage for their services, while also earning significant experience in a specific field that they are hoping to one day be a part of. This will almost be like a part time internship. This will be an new innovative way to interact with people in your specific field as well. It will be like LinkedIn but we will aim to get the assistants our in their fields. I believe customers will use our product over other personal assistant finder sites because ours will be utilizing college students. Not only are our consumers getting the help they need in whatever field they work in, they are also helping young students earn significant field experience and help mold them into the future workforce.
2) I received all positive feedback from my original Venture Concept post. All of the students who commented on my original post believed that it was great the way it was and did not tell me to change anything about my post. I think all of the feedback that I got helped me realize that I need to organize my thoughts a little better. I have always been the type of person who gets a lot of ideas all at once and then have to get them all out of my mind at the same time.
3) Based on the feedback I received, I did not change much about my Venture Concept post. The only advice I received was to organize my post a little better because it was a little off chronologically. In my most recent post i separated all three parts in a more organized manner that fits better for a venture concept idea.
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your second venture concept, it was very detailed and thorough. I've seen your venture concept grow through out the course and your business idea is excellent. I think it says a lot when there is only good feedback to say on an idea. I really like the concept of a personal assistant because it benefits both people involved.
Hello Max Press,
ReplyDeleteThis venture concept was very well written. You did a great job describing what your company was. A good venture concept is very important for your company. It helps outsiders know what exactly you are offering, and can assist you to build up a good customer base. Keep up the good work, and good luck with your company!