1) The pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
- All of the feedback I received for my first elevator pitch was really positive. Some people made the suggestion to talk more about competing companies and other websites that have similar concepts to us and what makes them different. I think that was the biggest takeaway I took from the feedback from my first pitch.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
- I did not change much with the content I was telling about my company, however, I did change the order that I talked about the company. I decided to start off with describing exactly what our company does, competition from other companies, I then I finished it off by telling the audience exactly what makes our company special.
Hi Max!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you looked at the feedback I gave on your first pitch. I now have a more clear understanding of your app since you spoke about what differentiates it from other similar job-search sites like LinkedIn. Sometimes a clear order helps people grasp a concept more quickly, and gives them room to start creating opinions and thoughts. Great job!
Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteOnce again, great job on your elevator pitch! I think this idea is terrific and so easily accessible on through a mobile app. This app is also great because it is a great way to get personal assistants marketed and out there in the working world. The sequence you spoke about the company in was perfect and your addition of speaking about other competitors was great as well.
Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteReally good job using your feedback to improve this time around. Reorganizing how you relayed the information in your pitch really did make it more enticing to the viewer. You did a great job explaining how your company is different and telling about what your businesses edge is over other similar companies.
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI think both of your elevator pitches were great. You definitely improved on the second one by mentioning your competitors. I think the feedback you received was very beneficial for your speech. Your pitch seemed very natural and it was easy to follow along. The concept was thoroughly explained and provided enough detail to still remain intrigued. Great job!